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Jumat, 04 November 2011

RECOUNT TEXT LETTER

Dear Dina,

How are you friend? along time I never meet you.
I hope you are always healthy. I would like to tell you about my last holiday.

Do you ever go to Malang? Last holiday I went to Malang with my family.
We went to Jatim Park, BNS ( Batu Night Spectaculer ) and Lawang's market.

At ten o'clock we arrived in the Jatim Park.
We had to buy the ticket in the ticket counter, and paied Rp. 45.000,- to one ticket. In the Jatim Park I was very happy because it was very beautiful and there were many interesting game.

After left the Jatim Park .We went to BNS.
BNS was very wonderful place. Because there were many spectaculer game. We walked around the BNS and I didn't realize that it was night. Finally we left BNS at eight o'clock.

Before we went home, we visited the Lawang's market to buy fresh fruits.
My family was very happy bacause the fruits were fresh and cheap.

Trough picnic to the Jatim Park and BNS,
I knew and could play the amazing game in the Jatim Park and BNS.

That is my story when I spent my Holiday.
I want you to reply my letter soon and tell me about your last holiday.

Your Best Friend

RISCA DIVA A

1 komentar:

tus mengatakan...

Very good letter! You get 95.
Correction for you :
We had buy to the ticket -> We had to buy the ticket

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